Tuesday, March 2, 2010

Areas for Improvement

7 comments:

  1. One way this blog could imporove is by using fewer pronouns.

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  2. You have a lot of information, which is good..but not always. If you tried to put in less information about Samuel Adams, your blog would be much more interesting.

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  3. I think that you could have done the main articles a different color since your background was blue too.

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  4. The detail was good but it was a little overwhelming.

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  5. Too much writing! It took forever to read!

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  6. I loved all the info but, it was a little much,but either way it rocked!!

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  7. I agree you put in a lot, but I would go to your blog if I needed to really understand him.

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Works Cited:

"Adams, Samuel (1722-1803)." Student Resource Center- Gold. Gale, 2003. Web. 24 Feb. 2010.

Maier, Pauline. "Adams, Samuel." World Book Student. World Book, 2010. Web. 28 Feb. 2010.

"Samuel Adams." Biography Resource Center. Gale, 2010. Web. 24 Feb. 2010.

"Declaration of Independence." Student Resource Center- Gold. Gale, 2008. Web. 1 Mar. 2010.

"The Boston Tea Party." Student Resource Center- Gold. Gale, 2008. Web. 1 Mar. 2010.

"Speech on American Independence." Student Resource Center- Gold. Gale, 1999. Web. 1 Mar. 2010.


Pictures Cited:

Coopley, John S. Samuel Adams. Photograph. National Archives and Records Administration. Samuel Adams. Student Resource Center- Gold. Web. 3 Mar. 2010.

Adams, Samuel. Photograph. "Adams, Samuel" By Pauline Maier. World Book Student. Web. 2 Mar. 2010.

Boston Tea Party. Photograph. "Boston Tea Party" By Pauline Maier. World Book Student. Web. 3 Mar. 2010.

Samuel Adams. Photograph. Asheboro City Schools Technology. Wiki, 2010. Web. 2 Mar. 2010.

"Declaration of Independence." Student Resource Center- Gold. Gale, 2008. Web. 1 Mar. 2010.